Review 1609

Huai’s a student in Melbourne who started up his weblog in April of 2002. Since then, sixthseal.com has been very consistently updated with the happenings of Huai.

The site’s design is very basic. There’s a light blue table on the left with the naviagation portion of the menu, which is very simple to use. And to the right is the weblog. The main page features a photo of the day (POTD) at the top of the page. It’s not exactly a photo of the day, however, but more like a photo of the week. That’s not really a major concern of mine, but I could certainly see how readers could get disappointed with the photo not being updated daily like one would assume.

The majority of the entries are simple to read updates of what’s going on in Huai’s life – dorm life, his social life, how his classes are going, etc. It’s fun to read through the progress of the school year and the entertaining mishaps that get written about.

A nice touch to this weblog was the introduction of posting pictures from time to time. While the POTD might not be updated on a regular basis, Huai does a good job of peppering in pictures that he’s taken with his digital camera throughout a good portion of his entries. Doing that breaks up the constant text and gives the readers something more than just words.

Is this a site I’d visit again? Personally, no. Is it one I’d suggest to those in college perhaps experiencing the same thing that Huai is going through? Certainly. And I’d even go as far as saying you should at least check it out once – perhaps you’ll find the connection that makes you want to keep coming back.sixthseal.com

Review 2067

Spinneyhead is coming on being up and running for nearly a year now. I went through all the archives to give the site as fair of a review as possible. It took all of about an hour. All of the entries are very short, with only perhaps one or two sentences in the majority of the postings. Only in the last few months does Ian finally get to be a bit more verbose, which is definitely a plus with this site.

Spinneyhead started out with Ian, our author, just linking to different sites around the ‘net, sharing limited views on them. As time has progressed, Ian started sharing more and more about himself, his personal life, and more extensive views and reviews of what’s going on in the world. Once this began, I became much more interested in Spinneyhead.

I had some trouble with the colors used for the layout of the site. The bright red background is nearly blinding before the rest of the page loads. Once the two white columns load, the site looks much better.

There’s more to this site than just the weblog, too. Along the left column of the site, you’ll find links to a novel Ian’s working on and several links to different photo galleries. There’s the standard links to his favorite sites, webrings, and other miscellaneous things, but Ian has it all laid out very nicely and it’s very easy to read and navigate through.

What this site has that so many sites now lack is intelligence. Ian doesn’t use extremely long words or quote prestigious news sources to make him look smart. Instead, he uses his natural intelligence to express his views, no matter what they are, and has also captured the art of keeping his readers attention. Obviously, this makes for a great weblog.

Spinneyhead

Review 2078

From the moment I started reading this weblog, I knew I liked Al right away. He has problems just like everyone else, and has the positive attitude to take everything in stride and lets his sense of humor help prevent him from getting down too much. At least that’s the way he presents himself in his writing.

Scrolling through the archives of the site and reading Al’s entries provided quite the source of entertainment as well as tons of information about the author. From July 2000’s initial post covering the reason he started a weblog and the meaning of the title behind it to April 2001’s obscure song lyrics Al can’t get out of his head so he shares with his readers there’s an enormous variety of different topics Al touches on in his writing, and each are just as entertaining as the next.

Colors? Nice. I love blue. So, personally, I liked the dark blue background with light blue text. It may not be ideal of everyone, but it is different than your typical light background with dark text. The little flash banner that loads at the top of the site is a clever addition to the site. I also loved the title – “your most important website for the next 30 seconds”.

Other than the weblog, you’ll find even more things to explore. The about section has a nice little autobiography, complete with tons of pictures of the author all the way from his early childhood days until now. He’s also got several different photo galleries linked in the navigation bar to the left hand side of the site

I couldn’t find anything on the site that could justify anything less than a 5.0 rating. I didn’t find myself just skimming over entries to get on to the next one, but really finding myself involved in what I was reading wondering how particular events or troubles had worked out for Al. This is what makes an extraordinary weblog.

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Review 2118

Notes from Pure Land Mountain, maintained by Robert Brady, and American living in rural Japan, is an honest effort at what I call “expatriate blogging.” The blogging tool is Blogger and the template is one of the plain jobs offered by same. A white background and a straightforward header. Nothing spectacular, no unnecessary plumage. There are some beautiful pictures and links to Robert’s favorite sites categorized into groups whose descriptive headline always begins with “Pure” — “Pure Japan Blogs,” “Pure Japan Links,” et cetera, et cetera, the “Pure,” I guess, standing as a kind of trademark announcement.

Robert writes at length about his daily routines in countryside Japan. He obviously loves the place. Living in one of the most compact and uniform societies in the world, a society that has traditionally not encouraged foreigners to become residents of the island nation, certainly requires a higher level of commitment and loyalty — and Robert obviously has it. Robert’s posts show that he has immersed himself in the culture and is working consciously to adjust to its complex requirements.

Thus, his interface with Japan is not based on a tourist / visitor mentality and, as a result, he is critical of those from the outside who fail to understand the current predicament of the Japanese. He writes, for example (April 30, 2002):

The cover of a recent issue of Time magazine was on Japan’s Blues. The feature story dealt with Japan as though it were alone on a bleak other planet somewhere, and as though all Japan and the Japanese have done that was worth doing is now at an end, and there is nothing ahead for them. All written by someone from a neoculture with a history of barely 200 years, regarding a culture of millennia. I would say right off that Japan, as a culture, is much more in touch with spirit and place, and knows far more about time, deep time, than anyone in America, let alone some New York journalist who’s been posted here on his way to somewhere else.

I happen to agree completely with this statement.

Robert is a capacious writer. He churns out lengthy posts with noted ease. This product, however, bogs down quickly because of endless sentences and Robert’s apparent dislike of breaking long passages into paragraphs, a style reminiscent of the late W.G. Sebald’s complicated difficult writing structure. Consider this:

But with that part I go on, and try again, and fail again, but when, after a week away I come back to the task, I find that I have learned another little bit, that it too is now part of me, has become intrinsic, is now part of what I know about stones and stone walls, part of what the stones in their limitless patience embody, and with that I go on again, begin to build, and fail, and learn another thing, and so it goes on, as bit by bit what I learn rises up like a stone wall.

I’m sure that Notes would benefit greatly by a simple switch to paragraph format, which will keep the reader focused on the thread of the post rather than the effort not to lose visual continuity of the densely packed text.

Robert is often poetic (see, for example, “Bird Gossip” on November 5, 2002) and sensitive to the “feeling” of Japanese land. He has deep appreciation of the countryside and its many delicate wonders, and declares at the top of his page: “Thank god for all the city folk, who leave the rest of the country to us!” How much I would love to imitate Robert now!

This is an honest blog. If you are a admirer of Japan, or simply a person who wishes to learn more about the country not from a travel brochure, visit Notes. You’ll learn a lot and you’ll enjoy some good, but demanding, writing. Notes from Pure Land Mountain

Review 2135

Today, some of the best locales in the ever-expanding Bloggosphere are centered on dissecting mainstream media stories and offering spirited criticism of big-time editorializing, and that makes everything so much more interesting (not to mention, giving the “gurus” a punch they wouldn’t have imagined five short years ago).

Ed. Note falls within this lively category of blogs-on-news. The webmaster introduces himself thus:

And Just Who The Hell Is Ed. Note?

Ed. Note (but you can call him, “Ed.”) is a veteran Chicago newspaper reporter/investigator/editor who spent decades covering the daily dramas of that great Midwestern city. This blog is his way of presenting news and opinion to readers without the tyrannical, oppressive meddling of (mis)managing editors and assistant flunkies. Oh, the stories I could tell! But he has some good ones, too, that he’ll share with you from time to time. …

Ed. decided to go on-line on November 19, 2002, using one of the most common Blogspot templates on offer, and the same one I used myself to launch my first blog in July 1998. It’s the gray background, with a white reading area, a blog title stripe at the top, and the grayish column on the left for buttons, links, and the like. Ed. provides only an archive, and deep, deep down, outside the reading area, a link to the Windy City Webloggers, the Chicago Blogs Webring. There’s also a Rate me link for BlogHop.com. Ed. Note is free of ads, which I think is a must for all webloggers given the option.

Ed. focuses on “A periodic reflection upon the news, current events, politics, government, society and the mess that results from mixing them together”. And, boy, isn’t he right in putting up this statement! His posts abide by this motto, with Ed.’s trained eye catching the nuances as he surveys the mass of news stories out there. Witness, for example, his post on the death penalty (December 7th) and on Colombian defense minister Marta Lucia-Ramirez (December 2nd).

Younger bloggers should be reading blogs like Ed. Note closely. Writing a blog is thought to be an “unorthodox” exercise overall, but, in the end, there are many basics even Bloggsphere guerrillas should observe, unless they want to remain largely nonsensical. Ed.’s writing is on the mark, unhurried, lucid, and without the twists and turns many consider the hallmarks of “creative” scribbling. And for those who’d say “but Ed. is a professional journalist”, just trust me: there are scores of “professional” journalists out there who’d win the Tin Star Award anytime with all fours on the keyboard.

I give Ed. 3.5 points only because the run-of-the-mill template subtracts from the whole design/technical picture of the blog. On content/style alone, Ed. Note is certainly a 4 – 4.5 effort. Also, I’m not sure putting Ed. Note in the Humor category tells the story. I’d certainly choose News/Links as the more suitable realm. And I’m happy to recommend Ed. to a wider audience without reservation.

Ed. Note