Review 2247

Blanksblog right away gave me the impression of being the home of a new blogger, and it is, but that doesn’t imply anything bad at all.

Being a relatively new weblog, the first post written in february, it can be difficult to realize where Blanksblog is aiming. But it is clear that the writer has already learned an important lesson. Some of the first posts are just too long even if they are still good, but the newer ones really show an improvement in lenght and quality.

The design is a standard template from blogger.com, but it’s still one of the best standard templates to use while starting a blog. It allows easy and clear reading while providing a nice and ordered space for links and extras.

Music is important to the author and it should probably play a bigger part in this blog. The purpose of the site is sometimes lost amidst random postings that are many times smart and entertaining, but there never seems to be a sense of unity in the blog.

This is a blog that still needs work, but it’s clearly getting better and learning from it’s mistakes. It’s still and average site, but the writer has the potential to turn this into a really interesting place in the future.blanksblog

Review 2250

[an exercise in narcissism] at first sight looks like it won’t be easy to read mainly because of the color scheme. Later I found out that not only the colors make it difficult to read, but also the actual writing.

While most times the posts tend to get overcomplicated, some of them are undeniably poetic and some beautiful phrases stick out in the middle of long paragraphs.

The design adds to the complicated and heavy atmosphere of the blog. The dark colors fit the theme of the blog, but a better color scheme could help in making this a more readable blog. In the blogger’s defense, this is a very new site so the design obviously still requires lots of tweaks, or maybe a whole makeover.

As a writer, there is not doubt that the author is very talented. Most posts are well constructed and the choice of words is perfect. But the problem is that there seems to be no purpose behind this site, at least no purpose that’s clear to a regular reader.

The writer has the possibility of turning this into a really good blog, but it needs lots of work and maybe a change in the way it’s focused. As this is a public weblog, the author must think about the people who will actually read it.
The blog feels too much like something that could be a private collection of poetry. The writing is beautiful, but most times it just feels like it’s coming from too far away. [an exercise in narcissism]

Review 2279

I immediately liked the look of Azarok.com as it opened. Some very nice rotating pictures on the top made me think that the blog would be much more personal and not so friendly to an outside reader. I realized my mistake after reading the first few posts.

Azarok.com is a very entertaining blog, with varied posts, many with photographs that help to make the reading easy and enjoyable. The author is not any sort of poet, and he doesn’t intend to be one. Posts are direct, clear, and not in any case badly written.

Although many posts make reference to web related things, others are closer to the personal front. And the good thing is that these personal posts do not drive a new reader away, instead, they are always interesting even if you still don’t know who each person mentioned there actually is.

This last point brings one of the highlights of Azarok.com. This is, a complete cast list, including pictures and brief descriptions. This is a great help for a new reader that’s just entering the world of Azarok.

The design is simple, and the site doesn’t seem to require much more. The colors are well chosen and the design works well with the site.

Azarok.com has other goodies. Many web games that are actually fun are available, tons of photos, jokes and more. Another high point is that the posts are not only ordered chronologically, but also by category.

The thing that Azarok.com could really use is some more reader comments. Many of the posts deserve feedback and there’s almost none. So take some time to visit the various sections of Azarok.com and you’ll probably find yourself enjoying most of the time you spend there.Azarok.com

Review 57

The first thing I keep looking for (often in vain it seems) is a context for the blog I’m about to review. Why do I care what you have to say? Tell me about yourself so I can relate to what you have to say. Even a few simple lines to contextualize your blog for the reader IMHO is essential. Please add an ‘about’ page! (I’m a skipping record on this issue aren’t I? Bah…)

Ruzz’s let it all hang out philosophy on blogging:
“I see blogging, inter-blog discussion, comments, debates and the like as an organic entity which is uncontrolled. I don’t trim my bonsai bush I let it grow how it grows. My focus, my concern, is not on the resulting controlled perfection, man over his elements, type beauty. Rather, my blog is a seedy bar where every night someone gets shot, gets stabbed, falls in love, finds out their wife is their cousin and so on.” .

I felt ruzz.ca had a decent layout. The photos along the left column were different and interesting, as was the background image. Ruzz updates the blog many times a day, often with short little observations and additions. What seems a little different about this site is comments to ruzz.ca form the main content of the blog (with Ruzz’s comments as well…). So, basically anyone can contribute (and is encouraged to contribute) to ruzz.ca.
“See. I trade you writing for writing. I write, you write. This is the system we have going here dear readers. Nothing is more annoying than pounding out 1300 words, most of which are blatant lies, only to end up with one comment. If I simply posted “Hello” I suspect my comment script would break from the frenzied replies. Nothing more annoying.. well, actually there is: Heartburn. ” It leads to a far bit of discussion by the regular readers of ruzz.ca. For the most part, I didn’t enjoy, the soap-opera like banter of his *regular* posters, but you may.

Ruzz has a lot of pointless entries in his blog which he is happy to admit, “I have no real content right now.“. But there are also many great entries where he makes some honest observations about life:
“If I treated my daughter the way some people who claim to love me treated me I couldn’t live for the shame. Love is not a condition. It’s not a mood. It’s not something you pretend to award when you are lonely and want to be around somebody. It’s something real and tangible. But it can end. It is not infinite. That Disney-esqe idea has ruined more than one person I know. But if its there, when its there, you just don’t offer and retract it based on the level with which you can tolerate your life or yourself. It simply does not work like that. That isn’t love. That’s using a person in the worst way. For those of you who do this, in your defense, the people who lap that shit up and keep taking it, like an abused house wife -beaten then rewarded- deserve what they get. I deserve what ever I allow another human being to put on me. In fact, the entire purpose of the relationship would seem to be nothing more than a construct in which to act out the parts and serve each other’s unhealthy needs. So don’t go pitying the housewife and hating the husband. They are together because one of them has the ability to be cruel and one needs the cruelty to validate their own worthlessness.

There is tons of content in the ruzz.ca archives. One month of entries on ruzz.ca would equal a year’s worth of entries on many other blogs. If you buy into this idea, of having to contribute (and not just passively read a blog) this site will certainly appeal to you. An interesting concept. Check ruzz.ca out and see if it motivates you to write. Ruzz gets the last words: “The highest highs and the lowest lows. The sweet and the sour. This is life. enjoy every fucking minute of it people.”

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Review 57

Whenever I review a blog, I’m typically able to guess something about the writer just by looking at the title. Not in this case. The title ‘ruzz.ca’ was obscure enough to make me want to go and delve into this site and find out more about Ruzz, the writer of the blog. When you load up the blog, I found myself facing a plastic bottle over a black background – more obscurity. As I began to read some of Ruzz’s entries, I remained puzzled – the titles of his entries are vague – “blah” , “gah”, “.”. However, after reading for several minutes, it dawned on me that this obscurity is what makes ‘ruzz.ca’ the type of blog that I enjoy – one that encompasses the author’s feelings and thoughts, whether or not anybody else can understand them.

One of the things that confused me about Ruzz’s site is that reader’s comments are listed underneath that day’s entry. For a moment, I thought I was dealing with a schizophrenic blogger. Even after coming to this realization, I often found myself wondering what Ruzz was talking about – he can be highly philosophical at times and downright artless other times. Many of his entries make references to friends, which sometimes makes his blog incomprehensible to outsiders. Not to say that there is anything wrong with this style of writing – my own site is written in this manner – directed towards a smaller circle of friends and acquaintances. It is, however, something to keep in mind when you are reading Ruzz’s site and thinking to yourself, “What’s he talking about??”

Ruzz.ca has a very boxy design and the yellow and black complement each other well. I enjoyed looking at the daily photos, many of them of everyday objects – a picture of a bench, for example. Another feature I liked on Ruzz’s blog was the mouseover that accompanies each link. I found myself running my cursor all over the place to find out what Ruzz had to say about a link. Ruzz also has an interesting box entitled “inputing” in which he discusses material he is reading – sort of like a personal book review.

I recommend you visit ruzz.ca primarily for the interesting perspective he offers and the occasional comment on current events. The pictures are also a part of Ruzz’s site that you will want to check out while you’re there. All in all, Ruzz’s site is apparently ordinary at first, but becomes more innovative as you delve further in to his world.

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