Review 2355

The 3rd World view states in its title that it is “views and links from a human being that lives in the so called third world”. This grabbed my attention as I was hoping to read a weblog which would give me a new perspective on the world as well as teaching me something about a different culture (the author is from Bangladesh).

To a certain extent the weblog did achieve this, but I felt it could have gone further- only a small number of the posts were about life in Bangladesh and these tended to be of a general nature, whereas I think some personal accounts would have been more interesting. There were a couple of posts about the monsoon season in Bangladesh (July 15th and 26th) and another about cricket (July 19th) but not much else.

The archived articles tended to be about international news stories (especially the war in Iraq), poems/song lyrics which the author liked and quite a bit about blogging generally. I felt the author may have done better by offering his own opinions on some of the links -some had no explanatory material at all. It also seemed that a lot of the entries, if not linked, were simply cut and pasted from other sources. Reading between the lines, the author clearly has some interesting views but it would have been nicer to see these expressed in his own words instead.

The layout was simple and easy to read, though one of the picture links in the template wasn’t working and I felt the side bar took up rather a lot of the screen (at least in the resolution I was viewing it in). There were a few errors contained in the writing itself, but I wasn’t sure if English was the author’s first language, so maybe these are excused.

Not a bad weblog overall, but the links weren’t explained enough and some personal entries would make the blog much more unique.The 3rd world view

Review 2355

Having only read the first few posts of this site and the subtitle stating the site was going to be about the views from a so-called “third world,” natrually I was anticipating a “third world” perspective from this blog. However, I found something else.

After having read through the archives which begin in May of 2003, I felt the site didn’t have a main focus. There were posts regarding the Middle East, poems by writers, blog related news and links to random sites. It left me wondering where the site was going or what persepective the writer was going for.

The blog didn’t contain any other links within the site, except a link to a page that contains his resume, some pictures from his wedding and a bio which still didn’t give me an idea of who the writer was. The blog’s design is a Blogger template which isn’t very flattering.

The site needs some serious work. The main thing is if the writer figures out what he wants to talk about and focuses on that, I think it would make for a better site … maybe a insider’s look on what Bangladesh is like? *hint hint*The 3rd world view

Review 2354

Honestly, when I first opened up http://www.bobby-digital.net/ and saw that the first blog on the page was about Bruce Lee, I sat back and said, “Wow, I’m in for a good hour of reading absolute crap.” After the first sentence I was hooked, these guys know how to send a message. Quoting “It’s not like these buff dudes are out wrestling Grizzly Bears every week for a living that they need to have 40 inch arms. And guess what, they actually pay monthly fees to build up muscle that they only put to use to open up jars of Spaghetti sauce for their elderly aunts.” has to be one of the funniest lines I have heard in my life. This is an excellent blog that makes you scream for more.

And after reading all the articles on the site, that is exactly what I am doing, screaming for more. Hidden away are sketches, pics, just about anything to keep one busy for an hour or two.

Marco, (the site blogger) has been around for a relatively short time, 3 months, just barely enough to get his feet on the ground. The design flows and compliments his writing. It does have the PG-13 atmosphere but and 10 year old with a good sense of humor can get a kick out of this writing. I give this site a high 4.0. I guess we can call it that, there really is not a 4.47 button and it is not quite old / experienced enough to hit the 4.5 mark yet. Very, very good start. Keep up the Hilarity and 5.0 is right around the corner.
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Review 2356

It’s a rare thing when I read through all the archives of a site when the posts are quite lengthy. Okay, I confess I didn’t quite make it through this entire site, however, when I started to read through The Accidental New Yorker I had to keep reading. It began to read like a really good book such as Bridget Jones’s Diary, or like an episode of Sex and the City on HBO. I was so engrossed in this site that I kept putting off getting my dinner from the microwave, even after it kept beeping at me every 2 minutese reminding me it was done.

Oh what can I say about this site? There’s a brief blurb on the home page that explains that the writer’s a gay novelist living in Manhattan, but this wasn’t enough for me. To get a good feeling about what this blog was about and who the writer was, I decided I need to jump to the beginning of the blog which begins in March of 2003. The writer begins by introducing himself and friends in his life whom he frequently talks about in his posts.
He talks about what a lot of people do on their blogs: his life. Except, the difference between his blog and other blogs is it feels like you’re reading a book which is a good thing. His voice is clear through his writing and he says it like it is which I love.

Taking a look at the design layout, it’s a Blogger template and is probably one of the better ones, but it would be nice to see something maybe a little more original. My only criticism might be to try and edit down the paragraphs a bit so it reads a bit better. I got lost a few times reading the lengthy paragraphs which isn’t fun when you’re trying to figure out where you left off.

If it’s not clear, I really enjoyed reading The Accidental New Yorker. It’s so nice to read a blog where the writer can tell a good story, especially when it’s their life.

Go read it … read it now!!!Accidental New Yorker

Review 2358

The first thought that popped into my head upon viewing Spivak’s Razor was “middle school computer lab”. The green courier text on a black background threw me at first. It seemed unsophisticated and old fashioned, but as I delved into the site and learned more about the author, the design began to make sense. (More on that later.)

Spivak’s Razor has been around for quite a while. The archives go back as far as September of 1999. I looked around for an “About Me” page of some sort on the author, hoping to get some background information before digging in, but none was found. Through reading the older entries, I discovered the author was a New Jersey man in his late twenties. The name “Spivak” was the name of a character he used on LambdaMOO. LambdaMOO, along with other online role-playing games, figures prominently in his journal. Indeed, some entries are clearly meant to be understood only by other gamers, but these entries are few and far between. Spivak is a prolific journaler. His entries are long, detailed, and for the most part intensely personal. He doesn’t mince words or censor himself. His brutal honesty is admirable, although there were passages that were a bit uncomfortable to read (entries detailing various bodily functions, for example). There was also a subtle bit of racism apparent in some passages that bothered me, although Spivak owns up this and offers explanations.

Some of the author’s entries are detailed and wordy to the point of becoming tedious, and it’s tough to get through them all at once. As a reader, I could do with a little more quality instead of so much quantity. There is some genuinely lovely writing to be found here and there, however. His descriptions of being outdoors on a cold winter’s night, his love for animals, and his struggle to overcome depression and self-hatred are particularly evocative. He also has an impressive imagination, and can be quite funny.

As I wrote earlier, the design of Spivak’s Razor is reminiscent of the old days of computing when text was all you had. There are pictures scattered here and there throughout the entries, some quite funny and interesting, but the site itself is text-heavy. Upon reading the journal, and discovering how into computers and gaming Spivak is, it became clear that the simple design fits his personality. He’s more concerned with the writing itself than he is with flashy graphics. His entries are color-coded according to a key found on the front page. Dreams are in purple, posts about gaming are in yellow, holiday posts are in red, etc. It’s a clever concept, a twist on the traditional category system, although some pages resembled a rainbow and were a little hard on the eyes. There were some broken links on the older archive pages.

Spivak has recorded three hundred of his dreams and nightmares and includes them in his journal, along with handy index on the front page allowing you to jump directly to the dream entries, if you’re so inclined. He also includes links to the gaming diaries he has kept over the years. These are hard to follow if you’ve never been a gamer, but I imagine they would make a fun read for someone into such things.

Overall, I found Spivak’s Razor a typical online journal. It’s a true view into the author’s life and thoughts. It was hard for me to maintain interest throughout the entire journal although there were bright spots here and there that caught my interest. A lot of the author’s writing seems to be aimed at friends and online acquaintances, and I would imagine that this is his intended audience. It succeeds as a personal diary and is certainly entertaining in many spots, but lacks the consistent quality necessary to become a daily read. I wouldn’t add Spivak’s Razor to my “must-read” file, but would check in from time to time to see how he’s doing. spivak’s razor