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This is Whitey, a questioning kind of guy. It’s also Bitey, his incredibly teeny wise-ass alter-ego, who pops in to attempt to shame, harry, pester or intice Whitey towards a more conventional form of writing. Thankfully, most of the time, Whitey ignores him and continues to give us a real stream-of-consciounceness free form look into his head and heart. They’re worth a good look.

Sordid Detail is just that: details of life, love, work, observations, hopes dreams and blogging. A non-complicated format, easily read, not a lot of external links or mishmash. A sharp spare wrapper for some tasty real contents, his words. I barely noticed formatting here, so busy reading what he has to say. (Did I mention no distractions from the writing?)

Whitey’s a complex guy who doesn’t seem overly interested in censoring his language or topics, which I found quite refreshing. There’s very little of the agony of self-editing apparent, although I’m left with the sneaky suspicion that he is astutely aware of exactly how he’s presenting himself. He writes with a nearly painful candor about topics ranging from music to mini-golf, barflies and bimbos, Moms and Moose(s) (Meece?). He’s got quite a varied history behind him, and I’m guessing a fascinating future in front of him. At 29, he shows a huge amount of insight into the human condition, and is obviously a thoughtful and articulate observer (and participant) of Life, It’s Ownself. He’s only been blogging for a few months, and I’m hoping that he continues indefinately…. since all of this self-challenging search for the meanings of things makes for an exellent read. A most intelligent and interesting writer with the ability to hold my interest despite a lack of foo-foo add on stuff.

Check out his August stories called True Stories Part 2, (this is the best moose story ever!) Using and Losing Digits, (Ode to a Handy-Mom) and the September stories titled Anatomy of a Fistfight, and Pills For Breakfast. These are just a few examples of a ‘Naked Gunner’ of a writer, less concerned with what you think of him than he is with getting his tales told. He’s articulate. He’s hip. He knows big words, and can spell. He’s someone I’d have a beer with.

I can’t quite give him an overall 5 score without somebody screaming at me “he’s not ‘fancy’ enough”… but as a reviewer who’s much more impressed by words then deeds, I think this is a totally absorbing read. I’d like to hear his music, and I hope he continues to write, for I’ve bookmarked and linked him already. Now for the disclaimer: He does use (correctly and appropriately) some ‘objectional’ language, and occasionally his topics may go beyond a PG rating. That said, he’s a savvy and sardonic writer, and I gave him a 4.25 only for the lack of flash and dazzle. His writings earned a solid 5 from this reviewer.The Sordid Details

Grand Theft Blogger. The title borders on something between “catchy” and “stupid”, but this blog is supposedly about video games, so I can let it go.

This blog is written by Jessie Lawrence, a 27 year old guy from Fremont, California. And his blog isn’t bad, but it isn’t great either. So let’s talk about the ‘why’ question.

The design is blogger. The header graphic is custom, which is nice; but the content is what seems to be lacking. Jessie doesn’t have any links to his archive pages from what I could tell, so I could only read his most recent posts. Some talked about his family, a few about gaming and the rest was personal opinion stuff. He has moments of comedy, but they are scarce.

Jessie talks about the death of his friend Angelo quite a bit; he was shot and no one has found the killer. Sad stuff. But the thing that is great about Jessie’s posts is that they are usually short and sweet. He doesn’t try to bog you down; he just writes what he has to say and nothing more. Done Deal.

I gave Grand Theft Blogger a 3.25 because of the lack of accessible content; also, it is marketed as being a blog about gaming, but I couldn’t be totally convinced of that based on what I had to read. He’s a good writer and I see great potential for this blog…but the things that I would like to see just aren’t there yet. Grand Theft Blogger

My Eyes is done with TypePad and has the typical three column layout. There are a lot of pictures that caught my eye and the posts were not overwhelmingly long. Basically it codled the short attention span version of me. There was nothing in the initial viewing of this blog that stood out or made it different from all the other blogs I have seen. However, it’s clean layout was refreshing in a world full of blinky blogs that are full of java aps.

The author of My Eyes is a 22 year-old graduate student at the University of Cambridge in the UK. The blog is filled with sports commentary, life events, and gives an honest view on how someone from the UK feels about the US elections. Like several other UK blogs that I have read the author’s posts are witty, cultured, and full of complaints about George W. Bush. As an American Citizen I am proud to say freely that there isn’t anything wrong with that. Many American’s dislike bush too. The great part about reading blogs is learning that you’re not alone. I would like to assure the author that when it comes to his thoughts on Bush he is definitely NOT alone. In one of this last US election posts the author writes, “It’s all made me think I don’t really care about the US election anymore and I don’t think I shall be posting much about it from now on. Let them elect Bush if they want, they’ll have to live with it, unfortunately, so will the rest of us…”

As far as the quality of writing is concerned the author has a short and sweet approach. All of his posts are very much the meat and potatoes of his current events, thoughts, or life lessons. It was nice not having to read a three hundred word post to get to the point that the author was attempting to make and I commend him for that. The photos catch your attention and the text is worth staying around for. Yes, there are many posts about football and other sports, but in between those is some great information. I can sum things up by saying that the author is an Englishman, so whatever he writes sounds very intelligent. Even the references to The Simpsons. The blog contains a few of the normal extras. A clock, the bloggers local weather, and a Blogroll. All in all it has the basic building blocks of a blog that can convey what’s written as opposed to what’s seen.

This blog tells the story of a life. A life that without the internet and without the art of blogging I would have never known existed. I love to learn about new cultures and new views on the world. As an American I will admit that we do tend to get caught up in our own little worlds. Reading a blog like My Eyes will open up your eyes to the world around you. The view is far wider than the distance between your local 7-11 and the Denny’s up on Main St. Reading My Eyes will help you open yours.

My Eyes

The first thing I read at ‘Do You Know What It Means to Miss New Orleans’ was ‘Heritage: 99% Cajun and 1% Attakapa (a cannibalistic indian tribe from Southeast Texas/Southwest Louisiana – draw your own conclusions). Political persuasion: agnostic. Favorite saying: My karma ran over my dogma’ so I knew this was going to be fun. And it was.

The author, let’s call her Esmeralda (her real name is Laurie, you’ll see why I’m being cruel later) has a wonderful good natured spirit. If more people were like her I’m sure the world would be a much better place to live in. She seems to have fun where ever she goes. Her stories are very funny, you’ll have to read a few, it should make you smile bigly. In one entry she refers to her friends as ’Brunehilda (not her real name) and I could not get a straight answer out of Shagundala (also not her real name)’. Ouch. And they still went out with you? –grin- She is always making up names to protect identities, she usually picks uniquely odd names. In another entry she is remarking how busy she is on Fridays at work, ‘What I don’t understand is, WHY ARE THESE PEOPLE WORKING ON FRIDAY AFTERNOON? Shouldn’t they be playing golf or drinking margaritas or cheating on their spouses? Where is their non-work ethic?. Heh. Non-work ethic! In spite of her blog only being around a short time she has a surprisingly vast amount of content. She really seems to enjoy blogging. Some of her other entries I enjoyed were ‘Carlsbad Caverns’, ‘Diamond’ (my personal fav) and ‘Necessity, the Mother of Invention’. She shares some really great stories, personal reflections and her take on life in her blog. She seems to blog every day so this would be a good daily read addition to your blogroll.

The design is pretty simple. She is using the Blogger template called Scribe. It has nice shades of brown and is very easy to read. A few of the graphics were missing giving me the ‘red X of death’, hopefully she can fix those. She includes a fair number of personal photos within her entries. You end up getting a good sense of who the author is and what she is like.

Overall a spicy Cajun good time. Certainly a worthy read, I’ll be back when I need a laugh or two.
Do You Know What It Means to Miss New Orleans

A pretty pink daisy awaits you as you enter this blog. The entire blog is primarily pink and green, easy to navigate and follow. It has way too many links in its sidebar (including the ever-present and grating Ads by Gooooogle and not one but FOUR “Your Ad Here” adbrite ads). As if those are not enough to clutter up a sidebar, there is a large blogroll, archives, “search this site,” credits, previous posts, logos, web rings…the list goes on.

The only thing that made no sense to me in the sidebar was the “Recent Searches” category. I assume these are things people who visit the site have searched for, but I really don’t see the need for this. Perhaps that is just me and my need to see less mess in a sidebar–it’s hard to say. However, even with all of this stuff (read: clutter), the site’s pleasantness is not lost among it. That’s a good thing.

I truly enjoyed the time spent at this blog. So do a lot of other people because you can tell this is a very trafficked site. I liked Busy Mom’s writing style (especially the family’s conversations that she relays). Check out a funny conversation called “Oh Great.” Or how about ‘the talk’ she was going to have with her daughter but her son seemed a more imminent target in “Wait, that answer didn’t follow my script.” Busy Mom has been writing for quite some time and it shows.

Even if you’re not a busy mom, you will enjoy hearing her stories, reading her thoughts, and sharing in just a bit of her life. Busy Mom Blog