Review 2799

Grand Theft Blogger. The title borders on something between “catchy” and “stupid”, but this blog is supposedly about video games, so I can let it go.

This blog is written by Jessie Lawrence, a 27 year old guy from Fremont, California. And his blog isn’t bad, but it isn’t great either. So let’s talk about the ‘why’ question.

The design is blogger. The header graphic is custom, which is nice; but the content is what seems to be lacking. Jessie doesn’t have any links to his archive pages from what I could tell, so I could only read his most recent posts. Some talked about his family, a few about gaming and the rest was personal opinion stuff. He has moments of comedy, but they are scarce.

Jessie talks about the death of his friend Angelo quite a bit; he was shot and no one has found the killer. Sad stuff. But the thing that is great about Jessie’s posts is that they are usually short and sweet. He doesn’t try to bog you down; he just writes what he has to say and nothing more. Done Deal.

I gave Grand Theft Blogger a 3.25 because of the lack of accessible content; also, it is marketed as being a blog about gaming, but I couldn’t be totally convinced of that based on what I had to read. He’s a good writer and I see great potential for this blog…but the things that I would like to see just aren’t there yet. Grand Theft Blogger

Review 2757

This is Whitey, a questioning kind of guy. It’s also Bitey, his incredibly teeny wise-ass alter-ego, who pops in to attempt to shame, harry, pester or intice Whitey towards a more conventional form of writing. Thankfully, most of the time, Whitey ignores him and continues to give us a real stream-of-consciounceness free form look into his head and heart. They’re worth a good look.

Sordid Detail is just that: details of life, love, work, observations, hopes dreams and blogging. A non-complicated format, easily read, not a lot of external links or mishmash. A sharp spare wrapper for some tasty real contents, his words. I barely noticed formatting here, so busy reading what he has to say. (Did I mention no distractions from the writing?)

Whitey’s a complex guy who doesn’t seem overly interested in censoring his language or topics, which I found quite refreshing. There’s very little of the agony of self-editing apparent, although I’m left with the sneaky suspicion that he is astutely aware of exactly how he’s presenting himself. He writes with a nearly painful candor about topics ranging from music to mini-golf, barflies and bimbos, Moms and Moose(s) (Meece?). He’s got quite a varied history behind him, and I’m guessing a fascinating future in front of him. At 29, he shows a huge amount of insight into the human condition, and is obviously a thoughtful and articulate observer (and participant) of Life, It’s Ownself. He’s only been blogging for a few months, and I’m hoping that he continues indefinately…. since all of this self-challenging search for the meanings of things makes for an exellent read. A most intelligent and interesting writer with the ability to hold my interest despite a lack of foo-foo add on stuff.

Check out his August stories called True Stories Part 2, (this is the best moose story ever!) Using and Losing Digits, (Ode to a Handy-Mom) and the September stories titled Anatomy of a Fistfight, and Pills For Breakfast. These are just a few examples of a ‘Naked Gunner’ of a writer, less concerned with what you think of him than he is with getting his tales told. He’s articulate. He’s hip. He knows big words, and can spell. He’s someone I’d have a beer with.

I can’t quite give him an overall 5 score without somebody screaming at me “he’s not ‘fancy’ enough”… but as a reviewer who’s much more impressed by words then deeds, I think this is a totally absorbing read. I’d like to hear his music, and I hope he continues to write, for I’ve bookmarked and linked him already. Now for the disclaimer: He does use (correctly and appropriately) some ‘objectional’ language, and occasionally his topics may go beyond a PG rating. That said, he’s a savvy and sardonic writer, and I gave him a 4.25 only for the lack of flash and dazzle. His writings earned a solid 5 from this reviewer.The Sordid Details

Review 2799

A nice clean looking blog, white background, small picture located at the top of a gun and some other indescribable objects. The overall look of the blog is pretty plain, but then I’ve never been one for much clutter so I liked it. Just looking at the blog before reading it gives the reader the impression that this might be a gun toting man who likes cars, but upon reading his profile, you find that he is totally the opposite!

After reading his profile, you find that Jesse is a 27 year old gamer, which basically means that he likes playing PC games. Again, this blog seems to be relatively new, there are only 81 entry’s so not much content. The content that is there is somewhat entertaining. There are a few links that did make me laugh out. I’m not quite sure of the purpose behind Jesse’s blogging, apart from his writing about things that catch his attention, from Ashlee Simpson to the Red Sox and even his thoughts on mobile versus land-line phones.

The entry’s are well written and easy to read. The links work and overall there aren’t too many links cluttering the blog’s “look”.

There isn’t much in the blog itself to draw people into reading it daily or more, but I think that’s something that will develop as the blog grows over time.Grand Theft Blogger

Review 2755

On first view, Monadology is somewhat difficult to navigate – the main body of the blog is set into far too small a space, and the menus which pop-up are extremely fiddly, not to mention pretty unreadable without bumping up my browser’s font setting. It made me a little frustrated, which isn’t ideal as a first impression.

I didn’t make it through all 90 points of “What is a monad” either, I’m afraid, but managed to make out (I think) that Monadology.net where the blog is hosted is a collective of people who went to college together? The posts vary from personal memories to CSS positioning, and a lot of cultural references inbetween. I’ve termed it personal for that reason, as you could be reading a review of a film one moment, then the next have a description of some of the author’s childhood memories.

The Movable Type template used on this blog really doesn’t suit the purpose – I’d love to see it laid out a little more fucnctionally, as there are some interesting links to other sites and photo galleries that just get lost in the translation.

Overall, I found the design issues to be the main problem, and it really hindered my experience. There are lots of archives, and no doubt there are many gems, but having to spend several minutes finding them was too trying.

Monadology

Review 2738

Komikero Comics Journal are the everyday musings of 36 year-old Jerry Alanguilan, a Filipino Comic Writer and Artist. Jerry has been blogging since 1999! Which would officially make him a grandfather of Cyberspace.

Digging into the archives, I found his posts to be varied in topics, but mostly relating to the daily grind. As of recent though, his journal has become more focused on the Art of Comics and related musings. Nevertheless, this is interesting as well, as even the layman should be caught up in the world of Comic books and delighted by some of the comics/drawings he posts and explains.

His writing flows easily and I’m sure those that personally know him must get a kick out of reading him. The average blog reader, if interested in a Comic Artist/Writer’s life and expression outlet, might take a while to get acquainted with Komikero, but once this is done, it should be great fun.

The layout consists of a clean white template with a right hand sidebar. Very appealing. The entries are written over a notebook sheet design, which looks well and matches the feeling of the blog.

His sidebar includes an about page (always helpful), links to a photoblog, another blog of a more personal nature, a message board where a lot of discussions on comics are going on (I think those interested in comics will find this appealing).

In short, Komikero is one of those well-thought out and well-crafted blogs which is always a pleasure to browse. As an Artistic Site it is of a very high quality. And due to his solid permanence on the net and reader following (and also because Jerry himself, is a very nice guy), I’d say this is a place worth going to if only to browse through something new. And for those in the Comic Book Realm, then I would recommend this site as a must.Komikero Comics Journal