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Alleged Gravitas

A site submitted as a 'creative writing' blog? A first for me. The subtitle of "Alleged Gravitas" is 'Poems, Essays and General Drivel' which comes no where near summing up the site. The site grabs you all at once and implores that you read on and read more. The standard blogger template (with black background and white type) is perfect for this blog of understated words and stories that hook you like some sort of fly fishing lure.

Paul McDonald of Louisville, Kentucky writes this blog, but only for a short time it seems. He does have his own web site, but blogging is new for him. He is a local commentator on NPR, and his first post appears to be from mid-December 2004. It is entitled The Revolution will not be televised and is a poem that he obviously felt compelled to post on a blog. My dislike of poetry is infamous among friends, but I so enjoyed reading this pop-culture filled poem--probably the first poem I've read all the way through in years.

I would give this blog a perfect score of 5 had it been a bit older and given me more to rave about. As it stands now, this young blog is very high up in my list of great blogs.

This site was reviewed on 2005-01-09 by SJtheMom.
They felt this site belonged in the Creative Writing category.
SJtheMom felt that Alleged Gravitas deserved a rating of 4.5.



This particular weblog is the creation of “local NPR commentator on WFPL, published poet, and writer,” Paul McDonald. And while the layout was relatively mundane (one of those Blogger pre-made templates), I was looking forward to reading this weblog. It had all the ingredients to be really interesting.

Unfortunately, I left the weblog with mixed feelings. Although Paul McDonald’s writing experience shows, and his words flow, I found this weblog very difficult to read. First off, many of the entries were in poetry form. While this is certainly an original way to approach writing a weblog entry, I found it tedious. My view is that poetry is poetry, and anecdotes are anecdotes; the latter is better in prose form, and the latter is what makes up a weblog. Secondly, the entries that weren’t in poetry form tended to be a little wordy at times and I sometimes found my attention wandering.

Which is a shame, because it isn’t like “Alleged Gravitas” doesn’t have anything to offer. The subjects of the entries are interesting; usually dealing with current affairs. Maybe “Alleged Gravitas” is aimed toward a certain target audience, but I wasn’t sure if it was aimed for me.

This site was reviewed on 2005-01-09 by Wynderlon.
They felt this site belonged in the Creative Writing category.
Wynderlon felt that Alleged Gravitas deserved a rating of 3.



2 reviewers gave Alleged Gravitas an average rating of 3.7500


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Site Category: Creative Writing
Reader Rating: 2.0000 based on 3 votes


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